You guys this is my final challenge (yay!) this one was interesting, you’ll like it. I got some advice from my friend Brady, check out his blog here. His blog was amazing ( My comments on his post will be right under his comments on my post) :
Brady
- I thought that Denis’ comment in the beginning was priceless, that huge organism in the beginning part of his blog was a wonderful surprise. I also thought that his blog was well organised, and I could find things very easy. I had no troubles in my search through Denis’ blog.
- What captured my attention, was the fact that he writes a lot of details for his posts, for topics he’s really into the topic and does well explaining his thoughts.I think what stood out to me is how it’s simple. IN A GOOD WAY. I think that it’s simple in the way where it’s easy on the eyes. There’s nothing over extreme, nor unnecessary. I think he extracted the parts he thought were appropriate, and put it in there. It’s not flashy. It’s his blog and his stories that are expressed onto this blog. Also that really huge creature.
- What distracted me? The really huge creature
- I think one advice I can give you is to put in more pictures on your posts, to kind of give an idea to the readers who are reading your post. I think it would help a lot, for them to kind of know what your talking about and can follow along. Overall I really enjoyed looking through his blog I got to see/ learn a lot. He’s one of my best friends. I appreciate him, and I can’t wait to read his posts!
Denis
1.My first impression was I was super excited because I’ve never seen one of my friends blogs, so I knew I was going to have fun reading it. When I opened his blog the first thing I saw was a huge rose, and that and the entering text WAS AMAZING!
2.What captured my attention I think was the rose I’m not sure its a bad thing that when the rose enters your screen it just catches your eye and is kinda distracting.
- There weren’t many distractions on his blog I think it’s great and the blogs all look the same so it doesn’t draw your attention. This may sound weird but I think that his blog needs more distractions. I don’t think I can say these things cause my blog is way worse so I really respect his blog and it’s really…. Great!
- There is not much I can suggest except to keep up the good work and I really think that you could add more dazzle and stuff to draw attention. Your blogs are really good but I noticed they aren’t very long, your blogs tend to be short and i guess a little rushed.The best thing though is that your posts sound like you made the, it’s your voice. – Denis